Accomplished+Pieces

Please comment =D Primary one (i thought your reflection and comments for this piece were insightful and appropriate) Primary two (your specific comments here revealed a understanding of plot especially- how did this come about? GE?) ~ New version~ Primary five (your comments and understandings are a reflection of your mystery unit? How did what you learned affect and impact you? Why?) ~New version~ Primary Four (I enjoyed and liked your comments here. What did you mean at the end, that readers could learn from..Learn what exactly? Was that your intention as writer? Do you, as a writer, think about what you want to explore and say? why or why not?) ~New version~ Primary Five Primary Three

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